(Second Meeting) Descriptive Paragraph

Paragraphs are comprised of sentences, but not random sentences. A paragraph is a group of sentences organized around a central topic or a paragraph is sentence that related to one topic. In fact, the cardinal rule of paragraph writing is to focus on one idea. A paragraph should be neither too short nor too long. A good paragraph in exercise should be 5-6 sentences long. As a general rule, avoid single-sentence paragraphs. A good paragraph is characterized by topic sentence, unity, coherence, and adequate development. 

Topic sentence:

Motivates the reader to want to read more and lets readers know the focus of a paragraph

Unity:

State the main idea of the paragraph in a clearly constructed topic sentence. Make sure each sentence is related to the central thought. Unity in a paragraph begins with the topic sentence. Every paragraph has one single, controlling idea that is expressed in its topic sentence, which is typically the first sentence of the paragraph. A paragraph is unified around this main idea, with the supporting sentences providing detail and discussion. In order to write a good topic sentence, think about theme and all the points that want to make. Decide which point drives the rest, and then write it as topic sentence.

Coherence:

Arrange ideas in a clear, logical order. Provide appropriate transitions to the subsequent paragraph. Coherence is the quality that makes writing understandable. Sentences within a paragraph need to connect to each other and work together as a whole. One of the best ways to achieve coherency is to use transition words. These words create bridges from one sentence to the next. Can use transition words that show order (first, second, third); spatial relationships (above, below) or logic (furthermore, in addition, in fact). Also, in writing a paragraph, using a consistent verb tense and point of view are important ingredients for coherency.

Adequate development:

Develop your paragraphs with specific details and examples.

Title: About Me

About Me

Hi. Do you know about me.? Ok, if you do not know about me, I'll introduce myself. My name is Selvi Lia Leo Neta. You can call me Selvi or Neta, up to you want to call me selvi or neta, I got a call two names because my parents and my family call me neta and my friends call me selvi. Many people are saying that  I look like my father. I do not know why, maybe because I also have brown skin like him. I have a brown color with beautiful eyes, my nose is not to flat, and my lips is thin, I have straight hair. My height is 145cm and I do not know my weight now because the last weighing, I remember my weight is 40kg. I live in 36 Kalibening. Do you know where is Kalibening.? Kalibening in Pekalongan, East Lampung. The best thing about me that can differentiate with another people are I have mustache and fangs, when I smile, my fangs so looks. But it nevermind, because with it, I look sweet, said my friend. I have same hobby with my father. My hobby is travelling, because with my hobby, I get a lot of experience, I can find beautiful places previously unknown to me. My father often invites me to travelling with family in weekend. My activities in free time are playing with niece, watching television and reading books. I like playing with my nieve because she is very funny, and I like watching television and reading books to increase my knowledge and insight , even I always demanded by my parents to read guidance prayer book so that my prayer more than before. I also read novel book. My parents are very friendly same like me, so do not be afraid to pay a visit to my house, because the door always open to anyone who wants to visit my house with good intentions, but my door always closed for thieves :)

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